simpleRECURSION || why i am never washing my hands again

January 30, 2008

why i am never washing my hands again

1:34 PM

True story.

why i am never washing my hands again

it's morning
and the liquid soap
dispenser
in the disgusting
men's room
at work
is empty

i ask
why is the liquid soap
dispenser
in the disgusting
men's room
at work
empty

i am told
the liquid soap
dispenser
is empty
because the janitor
was killed
last weekend

it's morning
and the liquid soap
dispenser
is full
at work
in the disgusting
men's room

Comments

Amazing. I love it. I love using a long sentence to specify only one object. This is one of my favourites in its simplicity.

Posted by Blazej on January 30, 2008 4:35 PM

Good.

Posted by Mike on January 30, 2008 6:51 PM

bravo.

Posted by MLP on January 31, 2008 6:36 AM

Danke. This was, I must note, a completely impromptu piece. There was very little rewriting or editing involved.

Posted by Mike on January 31, 2008 12:55 PM

most great things need not be edited.

like you. :)

Posted by MLP on February 1, 2008 6:19 AM

You are one tantalizing, little tart, sweetie. Man, do I have a little something for you tonight... ;)

Posted by Mike on February 1, 2008 6:40 PM